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Self-Healer

Deviation Actions

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Literature Text

Black shroud,
Ripped apart by opiate razor blade,
Pain advances and death retreats,
As life is on display.
Just a short one that probably reads like it wants to be a haiku. I'm also trying to do some visual poetry at the moment (when I have time, at least). Suggestions, anyone?
Thanks to :icondstrangestdream: for the stock.


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Ah, I saw I already commented on this. Maybe I didn't read it as close back then because now, I still think it's pretty, but in another way. It's dark and yet very beautiful, especially with the title - somehow I think it suits it very very well. Yeah, absolutely fantastic.